Review: The guitar add-ins and the beat make this a more complete session. I'm not a fan of sounds bouncing from left to right through my headphones, but it isn't repetitive or annoying at all. Overall, you are just missing the lyrical aspect. Great stuff.
Comment: You've left me some good critique on my submissions. I haven't read them until now. Thanks. After going through my page I realized I don't like much of it. Too much fruityloops, not enough real instruments haha. Recently, I've learned to keep my best stuff with me. As far as the rest can go; I'm going to apply them to real instruments and make something new.
-AP