MaryLovesJane's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Too Filthy For You (Dubst]

Awesome.

5/5 and 9/10! I really enjoyed the samples and the pick-up sounds from the build up. For constructive criticism I would have to say the bass could use some tweaking. Maybe add some 1 step LFO changes and some panning. Other than that, this song is sick! Keep at it.

Jimbobsthebest responds:

Cheers MLJ. It's been a while since I've written anything but I'm gonna have to get back on it soon.

Thanks for the feed back. It's always nice to hear when people appreciate my music.

[Isreal (ng cut) - josh]

I like it.

5/5 and 9/10! You did a really good job with the build up to the beat. It's soothing with a pinch of horror. The only constructive criticism I can offer: Explode after a build up into something crazy. That seems to be the only missing piece to this musical puzzle. Keep at it!

*BTW I find the post below me...HILARIOUS!!

thecokebitch responds:

Cheers for the review man, much appreciated!

And yeah, i understand what you mean by building up into a 'freestyle' of some sort haha, but i dunno - i always liked the deep vibes i somehow managed to lay down in this, and i rekon that if i put an 'explosion' into it somewhere - it might break the overall flow of the song...

But then again, i dunno... Im just real bad for leaving songs unfinished... For example, all the songs I have posted here on ng are unfinshed projects. I generally just draw a line at some point, and declare it 'finished' by posting it here... I'm not actually satisfied with the state of any of my songs.

as for the guy below me, hmm yeah... I wish him luck in the world :P

peace
-josh

[SR - Dubbed Out]

I like your style.

5/5 and 9/10! You definitely brought a different perspective to the term DUB. I loved the drum style and the bass was intense halfway through. The only constructive criticism I can offer is:

MORE BEATS!!

Other than that it was great!

SineRider responds:

Thanks for the review. I don't listen to much dub, so I was sort of going on how I thought it should sound. I'll see what I can do about the drums. They were pretty minimal.

[-:YRX:- DaughterOfJustice]

Nice!

4/5 and 8/10! I really like your take on this song. I think you would do really good with Dubstep. In fact, I'm doing my first dubstep contest. Enter! A dubstep/D&B mix would mesh really well. If you're using FLStudio there is a link to a dubstep tutorial on the contest forum. To get to the forum just click on the link in my signature. Keep it up!

YouriX responds:

Well i'll think about your offer. And see. But first i have to finish orginising and judging the AmenBreak contest. But i will consider your offer.
thanks for the comment by the way!

[This Is My Addiction]

4/5 and 8/10

I really like the general style of this song and the sounds you used. It was an interesting song, but it got repetitive pretty quick after the chorus. Maybe add a bridge or a solo-ish part to it. Great work with FLStudio though! Keep it up.

Dreamcastle responds:

Thanks for the review. I've tried adding more parts to this song, but they never turned out well. Therefore, I just uploaded it as is. I guess this version is kind of a demo... a demo of a song that may go unfinished.

[The Beatlab]

Awesome.

4/5 and 8/10! Again, I really like the beats you use. My favorite part was near the end of the song with the modulating short synth. Keep it up John!

sergeantx responds:

Thx! Ill have more stuff up soon.

[Jacobs' Cabin]

I dig it.

I like the beats and the riffs a lot. It flowed together really well, but I recognized almost every synth and fx you used in flstudio. Other than that, great song!

sergeantx responds:

haha thanks man! Im still working on getting better, and trying to find more software

[FF | Sun Sky]

Love the flow.

I was checking out your stuff and I ended up favorite-ing some of your songs. 5/5 and 10/10! Oh, and if you want to collaborate I've got some lyrics, and I have a friend that can freestyle about anything. Just hit me up.

Peace.

freddyfinger responds:

right on, thanks a lot

[Generic 70's Cop Show Music]

I love the 70's action music!

I don't usually give out such a high rating on this site (generally, because most of the submissions I come across are pitiful), but this definitely requires talent. I'd like to see some collaboration with a flash artist on this one. Keep it up.

UndergroundSound responds:

Wow, very cool!! Thank you so much. I'm working on some collabs as I write this!

Peace and thanks again!!

UndergroundSound